Find a struggle her wisdom might address
Junior describes his grief after the deaths of Grandmother and Eugene. He is considering leaving Reardan.
“I blamed myself for all of the deaths.” (Alexie 173)Read in the chapter
Read first. Make your own notes, then switch on the model highlights in each passage.
Use one word from each of 4 assigned groups. See the groups and sentence examples →
“My grandmother’s last act on earth was a call for forgiveness, love, and tolerance.”
She wants the driver forgiven even after his terrible harm. Junior connects that choice to the love she showed in life.
Her last request continues her values → care can shape a response to terrible harm.
See note 12 beside the passage · Alexie 157
Junior says that Grandmother’s final request expresses forgiveness, love, and tolerance.
Her response fits the way she welcomed people while she was alive. The harm is real, but she asks her family to give up revenge.
Find a struggle her wisdom might address
Junior describes his grief after the deaths of Grandmother and Eugene. He is considering leaving Reardan.
“I blamed myself for all of the deaths.” (Alexie 173)Read in the chapter
What is Junior blaming himself for? Explain one way Grandmother’s compassion might help him think about himself. Support the possible connection with the text.
First thought: Grandmother’s wisdom means Junior should stop grieving and forgive everyone immediately.
Consider a way to keep living with grief
The classmates’ support gives Junior hope. He begins listing people and other things that have brought him joy.
“And I kept trying to find the little pieces of joy in my life.” (Alexie 176)Read in the chapter
Look again: Junior keeps trying to find small pieces of joy; the loss has not disappeared. Explain a possible way her values could help him carry grief, rather than claiming her wisdom removes it or makes every choice easy.
Name a value shown by her words or actions.
Choose a specific moment from Chapters 22-24.
Explain how that value might help him respond. Use evidence about both people.
What do their choices show?
What message is developing?
What is different, and why?
The rez calls Junior a traitor for leaving; Rowdy ends the book calling him a nomad. Which one is he, and what proves it?
Open the evidence ledger through Week 12 →What does the wake show Junior about living with loss? Connect one moment here to a lesson from Grandmother and a struggle Junior faces in Chapter 24.
The laughter exists alongside grief. A possible connection is that Junior can keep caring about people and finding moments of joy while still missing Grandmother. Explain how that connection fits her values and a specific Chapter 24 scene.
Your notebook → your Aim Response
Choose your evidence here. Write your sentences in your notebook.
Connect her final wish to a lasting quality or value.
Name a specific struggle Junior faces. Explain how one of Grandmother’s values might help him respond.
Grandmother can forgive because ___. Her wisdom could help Junior when ___ by ___.
A starting shape, not the only way to write your answer. Replace the spaces with your own thinking.
The exact quotation, its context, and its citation will appear here.
In my own words, this means …
This helps answer the question because …
The exact quotation, its context, and its citation will appear here.
In my own words, this means …
This helps answer the question because …
Choose two different quotations. Then check that your writing explains every part of the aim.
The first detail shows … . But / So / Because … . Together, these details help explain … .
Choose the connector that matches your reasoning: but contrasts, so gives a result, because gives a reason.
This model answers a related question. Notice where the quotes, explanations, words, and appositives go.
Name her usual value
Junior identifies a quality he valued in Grandmother.
“My grandmother’s greatest gift was tolerance.” (Alexie 155)Read in the chapter
Can help with: Why she forgives.
Connect a choice to a pattern
Junior remembers Grandmother’s way of caring for people.
“Everybody loved her; she loved everybody.” (Alexie 156)Read in the chapter
Can help with: Why she forgives.
Explain her last choice
Junior interprets Grandmother’s final request.
“My grandmother’s last act on earth was a call for forgiveness, love, and tolerance.” (Alexie 157)Read in the chapter
Can help with: Why she forgives.
Find a struggle her wisdom might address
Junior describes his grief after the deaths of Grandmother and Eugene. He is considering leaving Reardan.
“I blamed myself for all of the deaths.” (Alexie 173)Read in the chapter
Can help with: How her wisdom could help Junior.
Notice care from someone new
After Mrs. Jeremy mocks Junior’s absences, Gordy drops his textbook in protest and the classmates join him.
“Gordy showed a lot of courage in standing up to a teacher like that.” (Alexie 175)Read in the chapter
Can help with: How her wisdom could help Junior.
Consider a way to keep living with grief
The classmates’ support gives Junior hope. He begins listing people and other things that have brought him joy.
“And I kept trying to find the little pieces of joy in my life.” (Alexie 176)Read in the chapter
Can help with: How her wisdom could help Junior.
Keep the whole aim in view. Explain both Grandmother’s forgiveness and a possible use of her wisdom in Junior’s life. Pair evidence about her values with a specific struggle he faces.
Use one word from each of these 4 groups. Complete all 4 groups for the vocabulary points. Words separated by “or” are alternatives.
tolerance (noun) — Willingness to accept people whose lives or views differ from your own.
Grandmother’s tolerance is a habit of making room for other people.
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anthropologist (noun) — A person who studies human communities, cultures, and ways of life.
An anthropologist studies human societies and cultures; careful inquiry requires listening to people who know the life being discussed.
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grief (noun) — Deep sadness after a death or another serious loss.
Junior’s grief is real even when he finds moments of joy and support.
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eccentricity (noun) — A way of acting that is unusual or different from what people expect.
Grandmother welcomes eccentricity instead of rejecting people for being different.
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An alternative from a listed root family fills the same group. Review words in a practice model do not replace this list. Connect each word to your point; a made-up event is not evidence.
The words between the commas give another name for the noun.
Grandmother, another name for this person or idea, …
Grandmother, a person Junior remembers for her tolerance, asks for forgiveness.
“a person Junior remembers for her tolerance” and “Grandmother” name the same person or idea. Keep both commas; finish with your own point.
Gordy, another name for this person or idea, …
Gordy, Junior’s friend at Reardan, stands up for him when he is grieving.
“Junior’s friend at Reardan” and “Gordy” name the same person or idea. Keep both commas; finish with your own point.
Point to the evidence in your own paragraph before checking a box.
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How do Grandmother’s earlier words and actions help explain her last request?
Which of Grandmother’s values might help Junior face a real struggle in these chapters?
Name her usual value
Junior identifies a quality he valued in Grandmother.
“My grandmother’s greatest gift was tolerance.” (Alexie 155)Read in the chapterCharacters
Tolerance means making room for people who are different. Junior presents it as a lasting quality, so her final request is not a sudden change of character.
Connect a choice to a pattern
Junior remembers Grandmother’s way of caring for people.
“Everybody loved her; she loved everybody.” (Alexie 156)Read in the chapterCharacters
The repeated word “everybody” makes her care sound wide and open. Compare that habit with her final request for forgiveness.
Explain her last choice
Junior interprets Grandmother’s final request.
“My grandmother’s last act on earth was a call for forgiveness, love, and tolerance.” (Alexie 157)Read in the chapterCharacters
Junior connects her last request to three values. This tells us how he understands her choice; it does not excuse the driver’s harm.
Find a struggle her wisdom might address
Junior describes his grief after the deaths of Grandmother and Eugene. He is considering leaving Reardan.
“I blamed myself for all of the deaths.” (Alexie 173)Read in the chapterCharacters
Junior turns his grief into blame against himself. Feeling guilty does not prove he caused the deaths. Consider how Grandmother’s compassion might help him judge himself more fairly.
Notice care from someone new
After Mrs. Jeremy mocks Junior’s absences, Gordy drops his textbook in protest and the classmates join him.
“Gordy showed a lot of courage in standing up to a teacher like that.” (Alexie 175)Read in the chapterCharacters
Gordy stands up for Junior when Junior feels too hurt to defend himself. Grandmother encouraged Junior to meet new people. This action gives him a reason to stay open to those relationships.
Consider a way to keep living with grief
The classmates’ support gives Junior hope. He begins listing people and other things that have brought him joy.
“And I kept trying to find the little pieces of joy in my life.” (Alexie 176)Read in the chapterThemes
Junior looks for joy while his losses still hurt. His lists include people who care for him. Consider how Grandmother’s love for people could guide what he notices and chooses.
Keep the whole aim in view. Explain both Grandmother’s forgiveness and a possible use of her wisdom in Junior’s life. Pair evidence about her values with a specific struggle he faces.
After explaining Grandmother’s tolerance, which quotation best identifies a problem that her compassion might help Junior face?
In your notebook: explain what your second quotation adds that the first one could not show alone.
The rez calls Junior a traitor for leaving; Rowdy ends the book calling him a nomad. Which one is he, and what proves it?
Open the evidence ledger through Week 12 →Reading practice helps you prepare. Your Aim Response is the paragraph you write in your notebook. Check that paragraph against the rubric →
Use each choice once. These are practice sentences, not quotations.
Grandmother’s greatest gift is : she makes room for people who are different. Her final request asks her family to the driver who killed her. Junior later struggles with and blames himself for the deaths. When a teacher mocks his absences, Gordy shows by standing up for him. Junior then searches for small pieces of . These moments let us consider how Grandmother’s values might help Junior live with loss and accept care.
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In your notebook, pair one detail showing Grandmother’s values with one detail showing Junior’s struggle. Explain why she can forgive and how one of those values might help him.
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